A good, clear mix of compliments and criticism
I've never had any professional feedback on any of my writing before, and I'll admit to being a little nervous when I first sent my chapters in. However, this was a really great experience. All of Sebastian's comments were a good clear mix of compliments and criticism, and I could tell that each one was thoughtfully made. I was able to take his suggestions and apply them not only to my submitted chapters but to other things I've written as well. My skills have been improved by this experience, and I'm looking forward to working with him again!